Ausarbeitung in Englisch über "Truman Show"

Benutzer70502 

Verbringt hier viel Zeit
Hallo,

Wir sollen für nächste Woche eine Ausarbeitung in Englisch über "Die Truman Show" schreiben. Ich habe sie jetzt Fertig und für den letzten schliff würde ich mich freuen wenn ihr mal drüber schauen könntet.

The Truman Show

1. Something about Trumans life?
2. Take notes what advertising is use in this Film?
3. What do you get to now about Christoph?
4. What strength things happend in Trumans life?




Storyline

In this movie, Truman is a man whose life is a fake one... The place he lives is in fact a big studio with hidden cameras everywhere, and all his friends and people around him, are actors who play their roles in the most popular TV-series in the world: The Truman Show. Truman thinks that he is an ordinary man with an ordinary life and has no idea about how he is exploited.


1.Something about Trumans life?

Truman is a middle-aged man, who works as a insurance clerk in Seahaven. He has brown hair and he often wears a suit coat. At home he especially wears shirts and shorts. Truman is married with Meryl Burbank, but they do not have children. At the beginning of the movie, Truman is charcterized by his friendly and happy personality. All the time one can see him smiling. He seems to be a optimistic and meek person. Moreover, he has a very amicable relationship to his neightbours, because he greets them very friendly and does not encumber himself about the barabrian dog of one of his neightbours. However, this also shows his naive charcter. He is afraid of deep water, because his father drowned during a boat trip when Truman was a child. His best friend is called Marlon. They often meet each other to talk about somethink or to drink beer. Trumans greatest wish is to leave his homecity and to go to the Fiji Islands.


2.Take notes what advertising is use in this Film?


You see a poster behind Trumann „Free range KAISER chicken“
You can see a other Poster behind Truman „ Carlton Fine Colonial Homes“
Meryl Burbank make advertising for a knife „ Chef's Pal“ it's a Grater, Dicer, Peeler All in One!
In the TV you can see Truman he drinking „Mococoa“
Trumans wife Meryl Burbank make advertising for the same cocoa „Mococoa“
Marlon holding a beer (Penn Pavels ) can close to the camera


3.What do you get to now about Christoph?


Christof is the creator of one of the most successful television shows ever: "The Truman Show." Christof's concept of following the life of a person from birth to death was unprecedented. The idea being that the only 'true' person on the show is Truman Burbank, and everyone him and the show's setting is a fabrication. In The Truman Show, Christoff is omnipotent. Behind the scene, he shapes and manipulates Truman’s life since birth. Christoff has absolute control over everything in Truman’s life, from the existence of the friends and relatives around him, the weather in Seahaven, to even the death of his father. Everything in the artificial dome was carefully planned, controlled and developed by Christoff to make it seem like reality to Truman.


4.What strength things happend in Trumans life?


Truman begins to mistrust the perfect world. The reasons are a lot of accidentally incidents of the direction team of the Truman Show. For example, a spot light falls down from the sky or the radio transmitter send the stage direction of the show. Furthermore, Truman sees his father, who drowned a long time ago. Based on this incidents, Truman tries obsessively to leave his city the first time. But he always fails, because the show team hinder Truman for example with a forest fire or a simulated nuclear accident.
But one night Truman manages to escape his sleeping area undetected via a secret tunnel. This shows the strong will of Truman and that he never capitualtes.
 

Benutzer12529 

Echt Schaf
Was mir spontan auffällt, mach ich fett, wenn ich etwas seltsam formuliert klingend finde oder so, pack ich es in klammern.
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Storyline

In this movie, Truman is a man whose life is a fake one... The place he lives is in fact a big studio with hidden cameras everywhere, and all his friends and people around him, are actors who play their roles in the most popular TV-series in the world: The Truman Show. Truman thinks that he is an ordinary man with an ordinary life and has no idea about how he is exploited.


1.Something about Trumans life? (wirklich so gestellt? wär für mich eher eine aussage, daher mit punkt statt fragezeichen, oder ohne satzzeichen am ende, wenn es ne überschrift ist)

Truman is a middle-aged man,(komma kann glaub ich weg) who works as a insurance clerk in Seahaven. He has brown hair and he often wears a suit coat. At home he especially wears shirts and shorts. (klingt für mich spontan besser, wenn da nen ing ans wear kommt bei beiden male, auch wenn wears vermutlich richtig ist) Truman is married with Meryl Burbank, but they do not have children. At the beginning of the movie, Truman is characterized by (with klingt für mich richtiger - warte ab, was andere meinen) his friendly and happy personality. All the time (komma) one ich bevorzuge you, one geht auch) can see him smiling. He seems to be an optimistic and meek person. Moreover, he has a very amicable relationship to his neightbours (ohne t! - da gleich nochmal neighbours kommt, würde ich hier neighbourhood wählen)), because he greets them very friendly and does not encumber himself about the barabrian (meinst du barbarian, oder ist das ne eigene rasse?)dog of one of his neightbours. However (kann man weglassen, klingt für mich so "abwinkend"), this also shows his naive character. (absatz, klingt sonst alls wär die angst vor wasser ein zeichen seiner naivität)
He is afraid of deep water, because his father drowned during a boat trip when Truman was a child.(absatz, und statt his truman's - sonst ist marlon der bf des vaters) His best friend is called Marlon. They often meet each other to talk about somethink (g statt k)or to drink beer. Trumans greatest wish is to leave his homecity (hometown, homecity kennt nichtmal leo.dict :zwinker: ) and to go to the Fiji Islands.


2.Take notes what advertising is use in this Film? (s.o. - satzzeichen weg oder nen punkt, falls net vom lehrer vorgegeben)


You see a poster behind Trumann „Free range KAISER chicken“
You can see an other Poster behind Truman„ Carlton Fine Colonial Homes“ (würde him statt truman schreiben. außerdem würde ich die sätze verbinden oder umformulieren, zb "you can see two posters behind truman, one of them... and the other one...")
Meryl Burbank makes (he she it... :zwinker: ) advertising for a knife „ Chef's Pal“ it's a Grater, Dicer, Peeler All in One!
In the TV you can see Truman drinking „Mococoa“ ("he drinking" - entweder "In the TV you can see Truman. He is drinking „Mococoa“ " oder he weglassen - meinst du mit "in the tv" den fernsher, den man selbst zum gucken benutzt, oder ist es einer im film, auf dem man truman sieht? wenn es der ist, den der filmseher benutzt, reicht ein "you can see" )
Truman's wife Meryl Burbank makes advertising for the same cocoa „Mococoa“ (name des produkts kann denk ich weggelassen werden).
Marlon is holding a beer (Penn Pavels ) can close to the camera

(ich würde die werbeslogans der poster und der messerwerbung in klammern setzen, so wie jetzt schaut es seltsam aus.)


3.What do you get to now about Christoph?

Christof (was ist richtig? mit f oder mit ph, wie in der überschrift oder mit ff wie weiter unten?) is the creator of one of the most successful television shows ever: "The Truman Show." Christof's concept of following the life of a person from birth to death was unprecedented. The idea is, that the only 'true' person on the show is Truman Burbank, and everyone (around? ein wort fehlt) him and the show's setting is a fabrication. In The Truman Show, Christoff is omnipotent. Behind the scene, he shapes and manipulates Truman’s life since birth. Christoff has absolute control over everything in Truman’s life, from the existence of the friends and relatives around him, the weather in Seahaven, to even the death of his father. Everything in the artificial dome was carefully planned, controlled and developed by Christoff to make it seem like reality to Truman.


4.What strength things happend in Trumans life? (ist strengt das richtige wort? kenne es nicht als adjektiv)


Truman begins to mistrust the (vlt "his", um stärker den bezug zu seiner welt zu zeigen, the geht auch) perfect world. The reasons are a lot of accidentally incidents of the direction team of the Truman Show. For example, a spot light falls down from the sky or the radio transmitter sends the stage direction of the show. Furthermore, Truman sees his father, who drowned a long time ago. Based on this incidents, Truman tries obsessively to leave his city the first time. But he always fails, because the show team hinder (evtl mit s, weiß aber nicht, ob "team" als er/sie/es gilt, für mich wäre team ein es und daher "hinders" richtig) Truman (komma setzen) for example with a forest fire or a simulated nuclear accident.
But one night (komma) Truman manages to escape his sleeping area undetected via a secret tunnel. This shows the strong will of Truman and that he never capitualtes.

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hoffe, ich hab jetzt nichts "falsch korrigiert", aber es wird bestimmt noch die ein oder andere antwort kommen. misch dir daraus dann dann zusammen und ändere, was alle meinen :zwinker:
 

Benutzer59943  (40)

Verhütungsberaterin mit Herz & Hund
Ich hab jetzt kein Zeit für mehr, ich mach mal nur den Anfang...

The Truman Show

1. Something about Trumans life?
Warum ist das denn eine Frage?
Im Englischen gibt es ein Genitiv-s, also Truman´s life.
Something bedeutet hier "Irgendwas" und das meinst du ja nicht oder? Also besser "Some facts about...".

2. Take notes what advertising is use in this Film?
Warum hier schon wieder eine Frage?
Und ich verstehs auch nicht... :ratlos: Bei use fehlt ein d, Film schreibt man nicht groß usw.
Ich verstehs inhaltlich leider kein bisschen. :ratlos:

3. What do you get to now about Christoph?
Now bedeutet jetzt. Also übersetz die Frage bitte mal so wie sie jetzt da steht, dann fällt dir dein Fehler hoffentlich selbst auf.

4. What strength things happend in Trumans life?
Strength bedeutet Stärke, also übersetz mal und finde den Fehler. Und Genitiv-s noch mal.

Und noch am Rande: Ich hab jetzt nur ganz wenig gelesen, aber ich kann mir beim besten Willen nicht vorstellen, dass du das selbst ausformuliert hast. Fehlerfrei ist es zwar bei weitem nicht, aber wenn ich an deine letzten Englischversuche denke... Und du kannst dich unmöglich in 1-2 Wochen so gesteigert haben.
Versteh mich nicht falsch, ich würde es dir gönnen, aber deine Lehrerin weiß ja wie gut oder schlecht du in Englisch bist und wenn sie plötzlich so einen "Fortschritt" sieht, dann wird sie doch stutzig, meinst du nicht?
 

Benutzer70502 

Verbringt hier viel Zeit
Hallo SchafForPeace und hallo krava!

Vielen dank auf diesem Weg für eure Hilfe. Ich werde versuchen das ganze umzusetzen und eure Tipps mit einbauen. Um deine Frage zu beantworten..diese Ausarbeitung habe ich mit jemanden aus der Klasse zusammen gemacht. Anstatt strenhgt soll hier natürlich "strange" stehen (Merkwürdige dinge)
bei dem "now" habe ich das "k" vergessen..ich meine nat. "know"

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Hey vielen dank für eure bisherige Hilfe
Habe es jetzt noch einmal etwas überarbeitet und hoffe es ist jetzt etwas besser mit weniger Fehlern


The Truman Show

1. Some facts about Trumans life.
2. Take notes what advertising is use in this Film.
3. What do you get to know about Christoph?
4. What strange things happend in Trumans life?




Storyline

In this movie, Truman is a man whose life is a fake one... The place he lives is in fact a big studio with hidden cameras everywhere, and all his friends and people around him, are actors who play their roles in the most popular TV-series in the world: The Truman Show. Truman thinks that he is an ordinary man with an ordinary life and has no idea about how he is exploited.


1.Some facts about Trumans life.

Truman is a middle-aged man who works as a insurance clerk in Seahaven. He has brown hair and he often wears a suit coat. At home he especially wears shirts and shorts. Truman is married to Meryl Burbank, but they do not have children. At the beginning of the movie,Truman is characterized by his friendly and happy personality. All the time, you can see him smiling. He seems to be an optimistic and meek person. Moreover, he has a very amicable relationship to his neighbourhood, because he greets them very friendly and does not encumber himself about the barbarian dog of one of his neighbours. This also shows his naive character.

He is afraid of deep water, because his father drowned during a boat trip when Truman was a child. Truman`s best friend is called Marlon. They often meet each other to talk about something or to drink beer. Trumans greatest wish is to leave his hometown and to go to the Fiji Islands.


2.Take notes what advertising is used in this film?


You can see two poster behind Truman one of them is „Free range KAISER chicken“ and the other one is „ Carlton Fine Colonial Homes“
Meryl Burbank makes advertising for a knife „ Chef's Pal“ it's a Grater, Dicer, Peeler All in One!
In the Television from the Film you can see Truman he is drinking „Mococoa“
Truman's wife Meryl Burbank makes advertising for the same cocoa
Marlon is holding a beer (Penn Pavels ) can close to the camera


3.What do you get to now about Christof?


Christof is the creator of one of the most successful television shows ever: "The Truman Show." Christof's concept of following the life of a person from birth to death was unprecedented. The idea is, being that the only 'true' person on the show is Truman Burbank, and everyone around him and the show's setting is a fabrication. In The Truman Show, Christof is omnipotent. Behind the scene, he shapes and manipulates Truman’s life since birth. Christof has absolute control over everything in Truman’s life, from the existence of the friends and relatives around him, the weather in Seahaven, to even the death of his father. Everything in the artificial dome was carefully planned, controlled and developed by Christof to make it seem like reality to Truman.




4.What strange things happend in Trumans life?


Truman begins to mistrust his perfect world. The reasons is a lot of accidental incidents of the direction team of „The Truman Show“. For example, a spot light falls down from the sky or the radio transmitter send the stage direction of the show. Furthermore, Truman sees his father, who drowned a long time ago. Based on these incidents, Truman tries obsessively to leave his city the first time. However he always fails, since the show team hinders Truman, for example with a forest fire or a simulated nuclear accident.
 

Benutzer83901  (36)

Planet-Liebe Berühmtheit
Storyline

In this movie, Truman is a man whose life is a fake one. (nur einen Punkt; schlechter Stil sonst) The place he lives ("where he lives" oder "the place he lives in") is in fact a big studio with hidden cameras everywhere, and all his friends and people around him, (kein Komma!) are actors who play their roles in the most popular TV-series in the world: The Truman Show. Truman thinks that he is an ordinary man with an ordinary life and has no idea about how he is exploited.

1. Information ("something" wäre ganz schlechter Stil) about Truman's life

Truman is a middle-aged man, (kein Komma!) who works as an insurance clerk in Seahaven. He has brown hair and he often wears a suit coat. At home he especially wears shirts and shorts. Truman is married with Meryl Burbank, (kein Komma!) but they do not have children. At the beginning of the movie, Truman is characterized by his (stattdessen geht auch: "as having a") friendly and happy personality. All the time, one (besser: "the audience", eventuell auch "you") can see him smiling. He seems to be an optimistic and meek person. Moreover, he has a very amicable relationship to his neightbours, because he greets them very friendly and does not encumber himself about the barbarian dog of one of his neightbours. However, this also shows his naive character.
He is afraid of deep water, (kein Komma!) because his father drowned during a boat trip when Truman was a child.
His (besser: "Truman's") best friend is called Marlon. They often meet each other to talk [STRIKE]about something[/STRIKE] or to drink beer. Truman's greatest wish is to leave his hometown and [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] go to the Fiji Islands.

2.Take notes on what advertising is used in this film

You see a poster behind Trumann reading „Free range KAISER chicken“. [STRIKE]You can see a(n) other[/STRIKE] There is another poster behind Truman reading „Carlton Fine Colonial Homes“.
Meryl Burbank [STRIKE]make[/STRIKE] does (some) advertising for a knife called „Chef's Pal“ - which is a Grater, Dicer, Peeler, All in One!
[STRIKE]In the TV you can see Truman he[/STRIKE] During the show, Truman is shown drinking „Mococoa“, while Truman's (oder: "his") wife Meryl Burbank [STRIKE]make[/STRIKE] does more advertising for the same cocoa [STRIKE]„Mococoa“[/STRIKE]. In one scene, Marlon is holding a beer can (Penn Pavels) close to the camera.

3.What do you get to know about Christof?

Christof is the creator of one of the most successful television shows ever: The Truman Show. Christof's concept of following the life of a person from birth to death was unprecedented. The idea is that the only 'true' person on the show is Truman Burbank, and everyone around him and the show's setting is (but) a fabrication. In The Truman Show, Christof is omnipotent. Behind the scenes, he has been shaping and manipulating Truman’s life since birth. Christof has absolute control over everything in Truman’s life, from the existence of [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] friends and relatives around him, the weather in Seahaven, to even the death of his father. Everything in this artificial dome has been carefully planned, controlled and developed by Christof to make it seem like reality to Truman.

4.What strange things happen[STRIKE]d[/STRIKE] in Truman's life?

Truman begins to mistrust his perfect world. Reasons "The" weglassen! for his mistrustare [STRIKE]a lot of accidentally incidents of[/STRIKE] various accidents the direction team of the Truman Show makes. For example, a spot light falls down from the sky or the radio transmitter sends the stage direction of the show. Furthermore, Truman is seeing his father, who drowned a long time ago. Based on these incidents, Truman tries obsessively to leave his (hier vielleicht besser "the"?) city the first time. But he always fails, (kein Komma!) because the show team [STRIKE]hinder[/STRIKE] prevents Truman from running away, for example with a forest fire or a simulated nuclear accident.
But one night, Truman manages to escape his sleeping area undetected via a secret tunnel. This shows Truman's strong will and that he never capitulates.


Das wäre jetzt mal eine grob verbesserte Fassung.
Generell solltet ihr euch dringend einmal mit der englischen Grammatik beschäftigen, vor allem in Bezug auf Deklinationen!
 

Benutzer59943  (40)

Verhütungsberaterin mit Herz & Hund
1. Some facts about Trumans life.
Der Genitiv ist immer noch falsch.

2. Take notes what advertising is use in this Film.
Das d fehlt immer noch und den Satz versteh ich immer noch nicht. :ratlos: Und Film schreibt man immer noch klein... :schuettel:

4. What strange things happend in Trumans life?
Genitiv :sleep:

Und mal vorab: Du solltest dich entscheiden, ob du amerikanisches oder britisches Englisch verwenden möchtest. Es ist nicht gut, wenn du ständig wechselt und mal von film, mal von movie sprichst. Entscheide dich!

In this movie, Truman is a man whose life is a fake one...
One würde ich weglassen.
The place he lives is in fact a big studio with hidden cameras everywhere,
The place he lives in oder at, aber viel einfacher ist einfach "His home".

and all his friends and people around him, are actors who play their roles in the most popular TV-series in the world:
Was soll das KOmma an der Stelle?

The Truman Show. Truman thinks that he is an ordinary man with an ordinary life and has no idea about how he is exploited.

1.Some facts about Trumans life.
Genitiv!

Truman is a middle-aged man who works as an insurance clerk in Seahaven.
Ja vor Vokalen heißt es auf Englisch an statt a. :rolleyes:

He has brown hair and he often wears a suit coat.
Im Prinzip ist der Satz völlig okay, aber ich würde es umformulieren zu "His hair is brown".
At home he especially wears shirts and shorts.
Was soll der Satz bedeuten? Zuhause trägt er besonders Shirts und Shorts? Meinst du besonders gerne? Dann würde ich mit "prefer" arbeiten.

Truman is married to Meryl Burbank, but they do not have children.

At the beginning of the movie,Truman is characterized by his friendly and happy personality.
Da versteh ich auch nicht genau was du sagen willst. Truman wird durch seine freundliche und fröhliche Persönlichkeit beschrieben? :hmm:

Vermutlich müsste es heißen:
At the beginning of the movie Truman is characterized as friendly and happy.
Wenn du dich fürs britische Englisch entscheidest, dann bitte characterise.

All the time, you can see him smiling. He seems to be an optimistic and meek person. Moreover, he has a very amicable relationship to his neighbourhood, because he greets them very friendly and does not encumber himself about the barbarian dog of one of his neighbours. This also shows his naive character.
Statt neighbourhood würde ich neighbours schreiben. Und im letzten Satz that statt this.

He is afraid of deep water, because his father drowned during a boat trip when Truman was a child. Truman`s best friend is called Marlon.
Hier ist der Genitiv ja richtig! :anbeten: Warum schreibst du nicht einfach von dir selbst ab und machst es konsequent so?

They often meet each other to talk about something or to drink beer.
or to have a beer

Trumans greatest wish is to leave his hometown and to go to the Fiji Islands.
:sleep:


2.Take notes what advertising is used in this film?

You can see two posters behind Truman one of them is „Free range KAISER chicken“ and the other one is „ Carlton Fine Colonial Homes“
Meryl Burbank makes advertising for a knife „ Chef's Pal“ it's a Grater, Dicer, Peeler All in One!
Da fehlen wohl Satzzeichen.
Werbung machen übersetzt sich einfach mit "to advertise", also werben. Das "make" fällt weg.
In the Television from the Film you can see Truman he is drinking „Mococoa“
Groß- und Kleinschreibung beachten! Und Satzzeichen bzw. Satzverbindungen. Wenn du nur einen Satz machst, dann musst du die Sätze verbinden... You can see Truman drinking "mococoa", also mit Gerund verbinden. Das Pronomen "he" fällt dann weg.
Meinst du mit "television" hier einen Fernseher? Dann bitte TV oder TV set.

Truman's wife Meryl Burbank makes advertising for the same cocoa
hab ich grade schon geschrieben... "make" kommt weg und dann eben entsprechend anpassen. Also Meryl Burbank wirbt für... (hier keine ing-Form, weil sie das ja konsequent und dauerhaft macht, also dritte Person und s nicht vergessen).

Marlon is holding a beer (Penn Pavels ) can close to the camera
Meinst du, dass er die Bierdose in die Kamera hält? Also warum nicht into the camera?

3.What do you get to now about Christof?

Christof is the creator of one of the most successful television shows ever: "The Truman Show."

Christof's concept of following the life of a person from birth to death was unprecedented.
"completely new" würde ich vorschlagen oder von mir aus "revolutionary". "Unprecedented" finde ich zu kompliziert bzw. dann solltest du den ganzen Satz umstellen..
The idea is, being that the only 'true' person on the show is Truman Burbank, and everyone around him and the show's setting is a fabrication.
Den Anfang versteh ich nicht... Was macht das "being" in dem Satz?
Was hast du mit "fabrication" übersetzt?
Fälschung?
Und bitte schau mal auf die Kommas? Nach welchen Kriterien habt ihr die denn gesetzt? Nach Lust und Laune? :grin:

In The Truman Show, Christof is omnipotent.
Behind the scenes, he shapes and manipulates Truman’s life since birth.
Statt "since birth" würde ich "from the very beginning" schreiben. Since birth ist in jedem Fall falsch. Das Wörterbuch spuckt für "von Geburt an" auch noch "congenitally" aus, aber mir ist das Wort nicht bekannt.
Christof has absolute control over everything in Truman’s life,
Kontrolle über etwas haben = to check on something
Kannst du ja hoffentlich selbst abändern. Und vor der Aufzählung einen Doppelpunkt machen! Was sollen da schon wieder die Kommas? :kopfwand

from the existence of the friends and relatives around him, the weather in Seahaven, to even the death of his father.

Everything in the artificial dome
Was meinst du mit dome?

was carefully planned, controlled and developed by Christof to make it seem like reality to Truman.
Hier würde ich Präsens verwenden, also "is".



4.What strange things happend in Trumans life?

Truman begins to mistrust his perfect world.
The reasons is a lot of accidental incidents of the direction team of „The Truman Show“.
Plural + is? :confused:

For example, a spot light falls down from the sky or the radio transmitter send the stage direction of the show.
Ein Scheinwerfer fällt vom HImmel? :grin:
Also ich hab den Film nicht gesehen, aber ich schätze mal, er fällt eher von der Decke oder nicht? Also ceiling. :zwinker:
Der zweite Teil ist anscheinend unvollständig... Ich kann ihn leider nicht verstehen. Was ist mit dem Radiosender? Falls das Wort "send" sich auf radio transmitter bezieht, dann fehlt das s am Ende. Aber ich versteh trotzdem nicht, was mit diesem Radiosender und der Bühnenrichtung (?!) sein soll.

Furthermore, Truman sees his father, who drowned a long time ago.
Wie gesagt, ich kenn den Film nicht. Wie und wo genau sieht er denn seinen Vater? Ich tippe mal, dass es eher eine Art Erscheinung ist oder?
Also ich würde wohl mit "to appear" arbeiten.
Truman´s father appears in the show although he died when Truman was a child.

Based on these incidents, Truman tries obsessively to leave his city for the first time.
However he always fails, since the show team hinders Truman, for example with a forest fire or a simulated nuclear accident.


Ach danke Spiralnudel! :smile: Jetzt hab ich auch verstanden, was bei Punkt 2 gemeint ist! :grin: :grin:
 

Benutzer83901  (36)

Planet-Liebe Berühmtheit
Ich sehe auch gerade, dass ich ein paar Punkte übersehen habe. Generell würde ich mich noch einmal in Ruhe hinsetzen und den ganzen Text sorgfältig überarbeiten. Ich glaube, dass einige Fehler und sperrige Passagen nur deshalb entstanden sind, weil hier schludrig und zügig geschrieben wurde.
 

Benutzer88899 

Verbringt hier viel Zeit
Off-Topic:
Ein Scheinwerfer fällt vom HImmel? :grin:
Also ich hab den Film nicht gesehen, aber ich schätze mal, er fällt eher von der Decke oder nicht? Also ceiling. :zwinker:
Der fällt wirklich vom Himmel. ;-) Das ist nämlich dann das, was Truman misstrauisch macht, dass da was Seltsames vor sich geht.
 
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